I love the colours in the sketch, and not so crazy about the deep red with the teal-blue of the plaque. The bright blue water with the green grass in the first is awesome...but then I do loooove blue and green together. (I just made a stick in those colours.)
I best like the fish that swim under the branches, they look more 'included' to me, less flat. Could you maybe make the water wave over them in some way? Oh that just sounds weird when I say it and I don't know how to say it better so...nevermind. I like the more similar white fish of the drawing, too...the different fish in the plaque look a little busy.
The maple leaves are awesome. They'd make gorgeous earrings. @.@
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Date: 2006-09-21 09:28 am (UTC)I best like the fish that swim under the branches, they look more 'included' to me, less flat. Could you maybe make the water wave over them in some way? Oh that just sounds weird when I say it and I don't know how to say it better so...nevermind. I like the more similar white fish of the drawing, too...the different fish in the plaque look a little busy.
The maple leaves are awesome. They'd make gorgeous earrings. @.@